even though i liked Ayumu and Touma the pace/progress of their relationship was too fast and their lack of communication, that lead to loads of misunderstanding and hurt feeling were very annoying and this whole manag felt rushed. maybe because the Author planned on making this short it was so rushed and didnt flow well - dunno it just felt like it needed to slow down a bit more and their relationship needed developing slowly - especially as neither had gay tendencies to begin with - this wasn't "realistic" or believable.
Loved Hibiki's character and wish had more of him, maybe as a side story - but i guess that's what happens when everything is rushed u miss loads of storyline development opportunities.
Motto Hanashi o Shitai no Dakedo.