i hated the "father daughter" intro and i don't like what it insinuates. this wasn't anything along those lines - i.e. not perverted or cringe worthy.
Really feel for both characters and glad that even though its tough and there r loads of roadblocks and obstacles they seem to always find, and be there for each other. guess this is going to turn romantic, but as it is written it doesn't seem wrong or manipulative so can't wait for more....
Not Entirely a Father-Daughter Relationship