there r only 2 chapters and still i find fault, this could've been so much better. but it doesn't flow, there these weird jumps and feels like stuff is just edited out that would add to the normal flow of this story and make this believable. everything feels rushed and unless the author wants this to be a one shot i would (maybe - kinda) understand but if this is going to be a normal size manga then i wonder whats going on and why this is like this.
Azfareo no Sobayounin