The plot is good but needs more detail and I’m satisfied with it. The age gap was wild, the smut was good but the MC should’ve done a good job communicating with Lumin. It was hard to follow the flow of the murder mystery but overall I’m satisfied. I’m happy that lumin got her happy ending and I wonder what happened to the MC. I would want to end the story with my own ending but I won’t be satisfied with that since it’s now my work. I would love to get to read more of this authors work.
Snowman