AxelNeuman88's manga / #Shoujo(25)

Not great, but not bad. The drawings are simple, the plot a bit confusing, nothing special overall.

Goddammit, mangas in the early 2000s were disgusting. In no universe, a relationship between a student and a teacher is OK, or romantic, or acceptable, etc. Use this and the many similar stories not as a romantic getaway, but as a way to discuss predatory behaviour that is installed in young generations thanks to manga like that. Repeat after me, please, I will not romanticize relationships between older people in power and minors. And the looks of the teachers (they can be as hot as Colin Firth or Monica Bellucci for what I care) should not matter at all. They can be hot, funny, average looking, with black hair or bald, with two left feet and tentacles, it does not matter. Relationships between teachers and students are a NO ENTRY zone and the story of the teacher in this story should end with the police coming into the classroom and arresting his creepy ass. Amen.

I think that the king actually killed her village and is a tyrannical monarch that raids other villages in search of gold and riches. Nice catch, young MC.

Bland and boring, the characters have no personality, the story has no real plot and I am a bitter woman who looks for something substantial in an old shoujo manga. Bless everyone.

The story had a lot of potential, it would have been interesting to hear and read more about this mysterious woman that the MC fancies. Possibly she is a criminal who targets rich foreign women in order to steal from them or maybe she is a government agent trying to discover the secrets of other countries. Maybe, in the end, the MC understands that even if she did not get the woman of her dreams, she got a new family. I do not know, but something more substantial rather than "she does not fancy me, oh, cruel god!". But I digress.

A simple, frivolous and vapid story. The characters are boring, the storyline is basic and the ending is predictable. I am a bit saddened that the one-shots for young girls and women are almost always so banal, why not give the story more depth, why not create dimensional characters and thoughtful endings?

An egotistical girl prefers to wish the world away rather than face her feelings. The guy likes her. Yay. What an amazing and romantic story.