Kizon's manga / #One Shot(3)

Him: The medicine didn't work. Me: No Shit Sherlock. Could tell that from him sexing you up in that situation.

My problem is it could have been longer and built up the story. Other than that I think it was alright. Beautiful art, good storyline (even though it was short.)

Dude really..... you could have made something really amazing but it was just a one-shot. It feels so rushed and unfinished. (I mean don't get me wrong it is alright and I like the concept, I just don't love the book.)