Kizon's manga / #Smut(12)

Him: The medicine didn't work. Me: No Shit Sherlock. Could tell that from him sexing you up in that situation.

I do like the couple but the surrounding characters mainly just pissed me off. The only reason I finished it was because of the cute couple. It also didn't really feel like it was finished, in my opinion.

Dude this is some Stockholm Syndrome bullshit. He got raped completely throughout the whole book and he was supposed to "fall in love" with them and be just fine with all the bullshit that they would do. There was no real plotline. It was just rape, rape, more rape, and finally at the end some slightly consensual shit they consider having sex (with all three of those little fuckers).

Honestly I found it disturbing. Don't get me wrong. I love beastiality stuff sometimes depending on the storyline. But this one was just a disturbing piece and the art wasn't really that good

My problem is it could have been longer and built up the story. Other than that I think it was alright. Beautiful art, good storyline (even though it was short.)

Man in my honest opinion, I would have liked it better if he had to just chose one of the guys. I mean it was alright but not really my cup of tea, ya know. Doesn't help that after chapter 4 the whole thing went down an everyone else is incredibly stupid rabbit hole. (Especially with the boiling bathtub not killing anyone. Dude yes it does. Negligent parents kill their own kids that way many times. Dude was a complete idiot and caused me to really have a problem with the book.)

Dude really..... you could have made something really amazing but it was just a one-shot. It feels so rushed and unfinished. (I mean don't get me wrong it is alright and I like the concept, I just don't love the book.)

What about the crow and mouse? Can't they have a story. I know it would be so cute.

What drives me crazy is the clueless main character thing that they always play. They always get their best friend who is in love with them into this kind of pretense but don't understand why they act annoyed when they crush on someone right in front of them. I really hate it. The storyline is alright. I don't know right now who is going to end up with him, but I do hope it is the small dog who has been in love with him and not this new guy that has been just introduced.