Down With Literary Police's manga / #Rape(6)

The character development in this is key. Daath is as immature as he should be at 16 while struggling to be a good older brother and friend suddenly thrown into a fated bond that complicated things even more because of his prickly mate. The conflict was really well written up til that point. The change in conflict from noble family affairs to sudden potential love triangle drama was unnecessary and those chapters could have been better used to address the familial conflict mentioned by Juda's parents and Daath's and Juda's son in the next story, Cuddle. Otherwise, the most consistent plot was well written and this is a very good series.

I wish the rape wasn't excused or forgotten, but with that as an exception, the story was very sweet. I wish it was longer to see their personalities and relationship develop, but I did enjoy reading this.

This story follows the common trend of older mangas that had been extended from magazine one shots. If the story had been a bit longer the plot and characters could've been fleshed out more, but alas, it is a 5 chapter story with the plot of an 80 chapter manga.