Midara na Hina wa Haru o Uru
Sunny boy Hazama wants to be friend with the and infamous Hiyomori, ignoring the advice of his worried classmates. The two boys got cutely close and eventually fell for each other but Mr. Pimp does not want his commodity to get distracted. auhtor, please just choose between fluff or angst don’t mix it and fail it’s unrealistic the ending it also rushed from comment 1)Ahh this was so disappointing ;; so so cliche and unrealistic. Hiyomori was forced into prostitution since he was a child.. he would not be this healthy nor have all his problems solved from a random teen stepping in? Everything that happened was just like, surface-level shoujo shit. Hazama falls in love for no reason, he sees signs of abuse and hears its been going on for years yet thinks "maybe he liked it tho?", doesnt call the police after he got that text... The pimp would in no world just let Hiyomori go. Hiyomori himself is probably the most one dimensional character here. Really feels like a middle schooler wrote this story. Published in 2017.. jesus. There's so much more that could be done with this setup but the actual plot is so half-assed. 2) . I agree with you on how unrealistic the story was, Hiyomori's situation is dark and heavy subject matter and it was handled pretty lightly and solved by just kind, positive, extrovert teenager lol. The plot has so much potential if the author did not make it too short. I like this kind of story to delve on to Hiyomori's feelings, thoughts, and situation more deeply. this story would've been better if it was longer and taken more seriously.
Boys of the Dead