Roses and Champagne
Entwined
sometimes i'm confused when I can't see dick from comments plot: 3 story: 3-3.5 art: 4.5-5 writing: 3-4 uke: 5 seme: 2.5 chemistry: 2 skinship: 1.5 overall: okay first of all i get it, i get the gist of the flow of the story the author was going for. they were aiming for something deeper and more complex but it just ended up being so rushed like there were a lot of things crammed into a tiny bit of space. writing had potential like it kicked me in the gut on some parts. it was good but wouldve been better had the story not have tons of things to unpack but very little chapters to talk about in. (/s:) the seggs scene on the first chapter was definitely out of line like seme couldve been a decent character if it wasnt for that like where tf did that scene even come from? no build up or anything just vibes and a dick for his brain yikes idc what yall think that definitely was NOT consensual lol this story couldve been more tho!! 3/5
Dear Gene
lawyer x janitor like works from this author i spoiled myself and yes it’s happy ending and not with that kids from 1st chapter his other lover that kids is the cupid
Naked Sword and the Tree Peony of Black