Hm, so I read the whole thing in one go and didn’t stall but basically the uke likes the seme so he does it in ways that benefits the seme but isnt good at expressing himself so he hits the seme or goes tsun. The hitting kinda put me off at first cuz I thought it would lead to a darker direction but I guess not. (Whew!) Although it still does put me off because..... it gives out a weird vibe?? Generally, I feel its unecessary but I guess its sorta like a gag for the manga now. Overall a cute read, although im not as put-off by the bi comment, Im more like EXCUSE?!?! */squints* The seme has a good head from time to time and Im glad he’s not really douchebag material although I feel like rn he’s more attached rather than in love with his uke and that proposing was way too early (although an understandable move on his part) but hng, great end. Congrats to these two lovers.
OVERALL: — a 3 out of 5 story
PLOT: — an over-used plot with an interesting twist and additional elements
CHARACTERS: ️️️ — overly fast redemption for our seme but ig understandable with the few chapters it has, as for the uke.. well, I like a fighter uke but hmmm
Welps, a good brunch for me!
Sukidesu, Zenbukudasai