The pacing is quite awkward and slower than it needed to be, it remains a very engaging story nonetheless. I'm a sucker for the" men raising children trope" kids are cute, and I like the couple. There is a fascinating topic that is brought up almost as to call out to the reader, a person mentions that they feel pity for the 17-year-old who has to take care of his little brother and that he is losing so much of his life due to the crushing responsibility that has been placed upon him. Later on, that person is made to apologize by the other young caretaker, stating that it wasn't polite to speak about his life with pity when she barely knows him. We are made aware that he takes care of his brother because that's what he chose for himself, and he has no regrets.
PS: The uke(a senior in high school 17) is much younger than the seme (vaguely college age or older) for no reason at all, serves no purpose to the story other than making it inappropriate and honestly concerning. I got over it to enjoy the couple, but I understand if most people can't accept it.
The Wolf in the Flower Shop