It's not bad per se, but just something about the dom/sub thing being secondary gender and that the sub is almost unable to not react to a command from /any/ dom just rubs me the wrong way. At least it ended with it being made that nonconsensual command-giving is treated as an assault. What irks me too is that it seems the author wrote domdrop without even realizing they did it, so that part seems to have not been done as properly treated as it should have. Anyway, the uke is very much my type.
Osuwari, Yoku Dekimashita