honestly, it's lacking with so many things if you were to think about them for like five seconds. only close to the end it became actually good. before that though, all but the last idk five last chapter were kinda boring or lacking in one way or another. especially the first time they fucked, it felt so out of nowhere since the development between them was basically zero, in the romantic or sexual tension way, neither made sense (plus, serious lack of prep and lubricant lol). probably the best thing was that they actually switched fucking.
Zero at the bone