concave's manga / #Smut(2)

Better art/concept than execution. Again, the scene art is RLLY GOOD tho, this artist is knowledgeable and knows what is up, what needs to be done. Couple at the end was cute ig. In terms of the whole consideration, nothing bad but nothing too special

OFFICIALLY KILLING MYSELF WDYM THIS IS OVER THIS HAS BEEN ONE OF MY FAVS????? everythihng about them just makes so much sense, its perfect!!! I love the love at first sight, especially bc it was mutual!! Seme was being petty and immature at the beginning lmao, but its so obvious how that changed into teasing bc bro thought uke was cute... and like same bro SAME!!! plus, i love how uke doesn't immediately accept the apology and his crush goes away, he's rightfully mad and not a pushover until seme shows through ACTIONS (not breaking the promise he made) that he still cares. All the scenes are DELICIOUSSSSS (although i admit theyre super unrealistic bs bro's refractory period =0...), PLUS THEYRE SO CUTE WHEN THEY'RE DOMESTIC LIKE HUH???? and the supportive friends were very much appreictaed!!! plus i really like how seme wasn't just this stone, he was always into and affected by uke!!!! Like to him, he wasn't just "cute" but "hot," he treated him like an equal and not in this patronizing way??? PLUS THE SIBLINGS ARE ADORABLE THEY REMIND ME OF MY SIBLINGS, its an adorable way to do this family with kids trope!!! just eveyrhting about this was beautifyl, INCLUDING THE ART (although i admit it was a bit rough at the beginning), we love to see improvement!!! The author is also hilarious when reading the note, everyhting about this is aboslutely perfect and being fr im so upset abt there not being more chapters