It was good, it had potential, but it was too short. God I hate short stories for this, especially when they could be so much more. The only thing that I found a little off was the maturity of an 8 year old. I suppose she's been through a lot, but it's so hard to believe how mature she, and Rondo is. I actually was hoping that Rondo could also turn into a human and they'd meet each other. That would have been awesome, but no, that didn't happen.
Nageku Shinigami