I Will Surrender the Position as Empress
Literally can't tolerate the art style for some reason the same way fl couldn't tolerate the shitty emperor any more Pacing is way off too, don't bother, future me
He Awakened When I Died
So many random, sudden time skips that fuck up the flow of the story. I've said it before and I'll say it again, if you don't know how to write a good story, don't make comics or start learning how to write better istg. Otherwise, very basic story, I could predict the entire thing from the first few chapters. Typical 'oh no, I changed the story, gotta leave before something bad happens!' Also, gurlie, u have magic - u could have just yeeted that arrow outta the way with a slightly strong gust of wind, com'on Edit: she really decided to go for the whole hallucinogenic-grass-weed thing lmaoooo
Men of The Harem