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Moonpie's manga / #cute baby(1)

Surge Looking For You

Complete | Chung Yun | 2000 released
2023-02-23 00:59 marked

I thought this story had a lot of potential at first, the figure skater x athletic swimmer plot was a total win for me and I loved it, but then of course, as I see with many omegaverse stories, once pregnancy or sex is in anyway involved, for some reason, the characters just...become incompetent??? There were so many back and forth chapters that I went from being excited about new chapters to being exxasperated when seeing an update and hoping they'd make up correctly. Of course, when they did, they ended up effin' it up again so. I dunno. I'm gonna read the side stories which might give me more hope in their future but I doubt they'll go over what happened or even acknowledge it or have ACTUAL communication, just as I've seen with many other omegaverse stories I used to love *sigh*. Well, at least the babies cute, but I can only excuse so many comics for cute babies before I get really tired. The story was great but now it's mediocre at best and borderline cliche and stupid at worst. I think the author had a great plot but followed what most everyone does and it was a poor decision when this story could've taken advantage of an omega who didn't seem completely weak at first impression. Edit at Side Story #9: While I still have my gripes, I admit I really enjoy the side stories section, the mc continues to pursue their goal (which is often something that has to get dropped after an omega gives birth and it's always driven me nuts, so I'm glad) and the way the ml continues to help the mc find ways to co-parent and even take on more as the mc starts to get busier is really sweet to me. The baby needs no long explanation, he's just here and I honestly love him so much, I want to squish him, he is so cute. Overall, right now my rating has been improved by a star ^w^, we'll see if it'll continue to build communicative relationships and greater character development.