Moonpie's manga / #smut(7)

This one just blows my mind. I was a bit hooked when it first started but found so much wrong. The amount of miscommunication between the main pairing is annoying and there is a running theme of the uke being sad and the seme being mad about something. Instead of talking, the seme simply slightly comforts him, doesn't try to reassure the uke of anything making him feel upset, then they have sex. That's it, that's their entire relationship. Oh but, it's all good cause the sex is good and the seme is a merman -_-. Anyway, this is by far the most irritating story I've read in a while so 1 star for me.

Wow, this one is rough! This one is just oozing with non-consent in the beginning and like most people in the comments of this story have noted, there is no safe word! Like, most things that are needed for a proper BDSM relationship to go smoothly, just don't exist??? Maybe I'm blind ?(。ヘ°) I'm fairly new to BDSM stories but I know that this is NOT it!

Read this a few years ago and finally came back to read it from beginning to end fully. The story is really good, if you're up for a lot of BDSM and a lot of struggling before seeing the MCs happy. There's no foreseen issue of rape or noncon so I give this one 5 stars!

I actually thought this was pretty good, even without a larger plot, I think it was mostly just to focus on the main factor: seme can't keep up with uke. Compared to a lot of other BL I really like this trope and how the seme learns to adapt and learns more about himself. I didn't really need a lot of character development since this seems like a comedic short story.

The unnecessary plot of cheating felt kinda weird...I loved the chemistry between the two but it felt like the whole thing with them having lovers could've been dropped in exchange for them just having past relationships that affected who they are and how they handle things. 3 stars for the great characters and I love the art but the plot involving their other boyfriends left me, unsatisfied to say the least.