Kinda good but sorta not? There's development but somehow feels like there isn't any. Plot decent. I'd be more interested if they started dating since these two communicating is the only way we're getting anywhere this century. EDIT: Well it happened but it feels so rushed I don't know what to say. One chapter MC just fucking loses it and spills everything, the ML is like "no I never liked this other bitch you're the only one for me" and then they fuck. The end. Also MC started disappearing which I think is supposed to be him going back to his world but he never completed the game which was meant to be the condition for returning and they don't bring it up again once he's pushed down on the bed. EDIT 2: To expand on that, when it's good, it's really good, there's just some questionable parts where the pacing and logic jumps out the window... EDIT 3: Not ML ripping out his heart and saying "I'm returning this" LMFAO. Unintentional comedy at it's finest!
Raiding the Vampire Count