I loved it! I definitely prefer with the sfx is cleared because it doesn't seem so jumbled when I'm trying to read, but that was my only small issue with this. The translation was great! The story and art was AMAZINNNNGGGGG!! I'm in love! I'm also super sad that there isn't anything else by this author. I'd LOVE to read more by them.
Shirouto Yankee Kikiippatsu!!