Zarita's manga / #Complete(4)

Cute and simple short. The pacing is good for what it is.

When the person handling your case doesn't care, the outcome is a mess. I'm pretty sure this is now complete.

It's nice, a little shallow at places, and doesn't follow up on some of the threads it starts. But overall it's nice and the continuation is a simple follow up on their life. The ending is one of the best stopping points I have read in a manga of this kind.

There are spoilers in this rant... You have been warned. These spoilers come closer to the end so I will place a * before in case you're interested in my ramble. Good character growth for everyone except the MFL. A lot of technical problems, not limited to her not binding her chest or wearing underwear at all. The only reason this story worked out is because it's working on dream logic. It's not logical therefore it works. Hospital visits never result in being discovered. Missing school never results in any kind of disciplinary actions. * The MFL has no future other than being a mother and wife, even though she has soccer skills on par with a male prodigy. Where is the story of her dominating the women's league with her personal coach/fiancé who managed to come back but could never surpass college ball? Seriously, this tells us nothing of her actual life other than her getting married and her ex being successful.