Zarita's manga / #demons(12)

I like it well enough, but by chapter 19 they forgot the characterization of a character they made. Erina was known as the sword of the empire and was interested in girly stuff but wasn't allowed. Now in chapter 19 She has an interest in swords but was never allowed to use them as a woman. This is a huge contradiction, especially considering she was the first to battle the chimera and was able to rate it's strength and skill.

One of my favorites, re-reading this has made me want to get my paper copy out of storage. It's a feel good story that emphasizes that it's not material things that save people but genuine kindness. The things we do that are small and almost insignificant to us but given from a genuine place.

Other than over explanation at places and underdevelopment in others this story seems ok. But there's not enough to judge in full yet.

The main female has no purpose other than to be raped and impregnated. Seriously, there is no point to her, I thought she was going to be a main character, instead she's just a piece of meat. Also, the fetus of evil escaped at the end. Seriously? You didn't even properly bless their final resting place? Also suicide is considered inherently evil in almost all religions so by doing that noble death they just fed the evil. How wonderful.

Ch 9, Why cant people just talk. you spent all that time thinking, if you had just made your thoughts out loud then most of the problems would have been solved. Maybe... Either way, this is a whole cluster of messed up.

Ch 46, I like that he isn't trying to force a normal life, but is living his life through his convictions of treating people like people and not callously taking lives. By the way, where did the horned rabbit bear go?