supremecurt's manga / #assertive(2)

There were multiple instances where the panel flow is disconnected, thus making it a bit hard to follow-through. The script is also a bit confusing, not sure if it's the translation or just the actual script itself, cannot tell. The author seems to have a lot of ideas and ended up cramming them in short chapters. Has potential, but still needs refinement. Update: The character that had the most impact was Yone-senpai. Even if the author is shoving the first couple down my throat I couldn't help but gag a bit. I just wasn't invested on them that much. I think it's 'cause the main characters are too out of it (almost too much) that Yone-senpai was a breath of fresh air. Changed rating from 3 to 4 'cause of Vol 3. Volume 3 was so juicy! Ao has the assertiveness Yone-senpai lacks; they balance each other out and I'm living for it

Based on a true story. The interview with Yanagi-san (the basis of the main character in this story) was a great read. He seems to be a wonderful person! Hope he and Masaru-san stay happy forever AAAAGGGH <3