Obey Me
On rereading it felt like a parody of killing stalking. It wanted to recreate the atmosphere and intrigue of that story but in shorter time frame and a bit less developed. It's not the best but it's not the worst either. My only two issues is the reason why the kidnapper kidnapped the trans girl and put her in the same cell as the mc. That never was explained why he grabbed her specifically. And the ending when he went into the convenience store and met the kidnapper a second time and ended with "you really never learn" like bro what?! I wanted everyone that's not the kidnapper to have a happy ending and I thought I would get that bit they put that ambiguous ending. Similarly to killing stalking when the mc ran out into the busy street, but you knew that Yoon bum was gonna get hit by a car and die from the delusions afterward. Even then, if you really wanted to, since we didnt see him get hit by a car and was only implied, you could say he almost got hit, or that he survived afterward. Here, you don't get the clear ending at all, he sees him again and your left with a feeling of dissatisfaction because you want to know, "did he get kidnapped again?" "What about his girlfriend?" "Did he end up getting charged at the end or what happened with the confrontation?" Amd finally, "did the mc's best friend's older brother end up succumbing to his wounds?" Sorry this is so long and I don't remember names at all but I felt like I should update my rating since I had read it once more.
Hold Me Tight
Ahhh it's over now. This was really cute. The ending is so far from how we started and I'm feeling very satisfied. No extra plot point felt like it came out of nowhere and overall was very good.
Please Draw me, Love!