Kay's manga / #One Shot(87)

The story felt a little rushed and unfinished, no doubt because it had been made a one-shot. However, I felt the story could have been great if ‘fleshed out’ a little more. There was just too much story and not enough space to fit it all, so it felt disjointed (constantly jumping from between scenes prevents the drama from having as strong a impact as it could have and makes the story a little harder to follow, preventing you from fully immersing yourself in the story) and alluded to past events without fully explaining what they were or what they meant,. The drama would also have been more powerful if it had told the story leading up to these events, with the descent into the Nazi’s violent treatment of the pianist and there could have been more story added to the end so that you wouldn’t feel as disappointed at the end.

️️-️-[⚣]⏭1 ️1 ️2000 6apr2020 9jan2020 4️-8.3 ️The love story that required just a little courage begins.

9jan2020

One Shot, trans 2013 Kanda Neko Two classmates joke around about their close relationship, joking at school as though they are in love. But then one decides to truely confess his love for the other without the joking tone they have used at school.