Kay's manga / #Prisoner(2)

The story felt a little rushed and unfinished, no doubt because it had been made a one-shot. However, I felt the story could have been great if ‘fleshed out’ a little more. There was just too much story and not enough space to fit it all, so it felt disjointed (constantly jumping from between scenes prevents the drama from having as strong a impact as it could have and makes the story a little harder to follow, preventing you from fully immersing yourself in the story) and alluded to past events without fully explaining what they were or what they meant,. The drama would also have been more powerful if it had told the story leading up to these events, with the descent into the Nazi’s violent treatment of the pianist and there could have been more story added to the end so that you wouldn’t feel as disappointed at the end.

⏯-️-[⚣]⏭9.1=T.11 ️1 ️2007 4apr2016 24apr2020 ☣️Unsure why It’s been tagged fantasy. These places and soldiers existed once. Jamal has different name at start, later he has a name change. Gerun Fortress, under the command of officer Leonard, is attacked by the prestigious general Jamal of the Middle Eastern Empire. With no hope of winning, Leonard hopes to negotiate with Jamal, using his own life in exchange for his men. ️Lists & Tags+️ ️—️4.1️—️—️ 00’s ️—️—️️⏭10-19—️—8.0-8.9—️ ️ ️-️-[⚣]⏭11 ️1 24apr2020 ️ Ogasawara ️ ️ 2007 ️ : Yaoi : ️ 4 ️ 8.3 ️ ️️ ️ | ️ | ️ | ️ | ️ | — ️ꐀ↯ — ☷-ᛒ — ☥ ️️-[⚣]— ᛪ-⚕