Kay's manga / #nazi(3)

The story felt a little rushed and unfinished, no doubt because it had been made a one-shot. However, I felt the story could have been great if ‘fleshed out’ a little more. There was just too much story and not enough space to fit it all, so it felt disjointed (constantly jumping from between scenes prevents the drama from having as strong a impact as it could have and makes the story a little harder to follow, preventing you from fully immersing yourself in the story) and alluded to past events without fully explaining what they were or what they meant,. The drama would also have been more powerful if it had told the story leading up to these events, with the descent into the Nazi’s violent treatment of the pianist and there could have been more story added to the end so that you wouldn’t feel as disappointed at the end.

The little cat/dog manga in between each chapter of the main manga was distracting from the main Storylines flow (making the main story not as good as it may have been without the cat/dog manga) and the cat/dog manga wasn't very good anyway, so I didn’t really get the purpose of putting them in, especially in that kind of format.