pluckaduck's manga / #Magic(44)

now that I think about it, there is no real tactic to defeat the antagonists stronger than them. basically, it is as follows: lose->power of friendship->sudden power burst->win

legit nothing going on that shows her prowess as a 300 yo mage. her personality is lackluster and undeveloped, and her way of thinking is childish, not mature at all. the plot progression is slow and the concept is unoriginal. also, it's very unrealistic how this guy who is cold to his children will suddenly start caring for mc, just after a day. it's not fair to his other children bc if she wasn't actually an adult inside and didn't deliberately act cutely, he wouldn't give a shit about her and she would've probably died.