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pluckaduck's manga / #Oni and Momotaro(1)

Tougen Anki

Ongoing | Urushibara yura | 2019 released

ch 54. getting soo pissed and vexed how everything is playing right into that ugly guy with tattoo's hands. maybe if they hadn't revealed how much the ugly guy was playing them like a fool as the story progressed up to the climax of mc and his 'friend's' breakup but instead revealed all that he had done after the aforementioned climax, it'd be more of a 'oh DAMN' moment. I wouldn't be as vexed as much as I'd be shocked. also, why the boobs so big? ch65. long haired guy pisses me off. he's so narrow-minded and his trust in mc must have been so minuscule that he's not even willing to give mc the benefit of the doubt or hear him out, and ruminate over the possibility that the incident was to sow tension between them? the dialogue and facial expressions doesn't help either, it's not angsty, there's no undertones of resentment in his words; it's lackluster ch67. ahh fuck he's so condescending, despite saying "i dislike being cruel to the weak". did the author intentionally make him so dislikable/obnoxious or does the author just dont give a shit about dialogue/characterization? ch88. wondering if i should drop this... this manga isn't bad, but it's not great either. the art is okay, but all the guys kinda look the same. the artist doesn't know how to convey emotions thru angle shots and atmosphere, which is also why the tension had been flat thru out the whole manga. it lacks subtlety and nuance. the dialogue sucks, im sorry, but it's like telling us what they think and feel, rather than showing us thru their words and silence. and all the fights so far had kinda sucked bc of the angles and lack of tension and twists. the characters seem to possess only one characteristic. like the timid girl...her whole personality is being a timid person who thinks of herself as useless. the guy who keeps yapping about one thing- that his peers arent friends and he needs to get stronger. ughh it makes them so dismissable and unlikeable. overall, it's bland and uninspired. i am flabbergasted as to how this has the same rating as Ajin, which is leagues above this.