pluckaduck's manga / #want more!!!(23)

had to detract a star with how the plot/arcs is going. also, the villains are so comically evil now that I have to suspend my disbelief more. i get that they're deconstructions of the tropes of CN, but they're getting too ridiculous to be taken seriously; they're all now the same poorly-written cookie-cutter evil bitch who are just props for mc to show off her amazing-ness. the tension is very nonexistent bc the arcs are very fast-paced, and the extras are idiots. also, can we please not put so much emphasis on dressing mc for a photoshoot? like she looks great in them, but more time should be allotted for the dialogue/writing.

this will never stop being so culturally relevant in the bl community lmao.