Not bad, if it were longer, i feel like readers couldve had the chance to see the seme's life more in depth and hence, sympathize more..as, it seems that many are not understanding the great effect his past had on him. Of course it is very wrong to do what he did but those women were people who only liked his looks and wealthiness, quite careless. Overall, longer story wldve been better
Hitsuji no Kawa wo Kita Kemono