Morohtar's manga / #Cute(8)

The storytelling feels quite jumbled at times and going back and forth in time isn't as clearly indicated as it could be, which can be confusing at times, but it's not too bad in general. The story is silly and nice, fluffy to give one word, but it has it's realistic aspects too. Which makes it a nice, light read. It could be a masterpiece if it was redone and elaborated on in full detail, but it's good as it is too. Definitely a nice casual read I could recommend for beginners.

The only thing I do not like is that MC is simply NOT behaving correctly with his brother. I get wanting to be a friendly little family character, but he got sold, wtf are you just letting him back in your life for? Especially without telling him off, slapping him as he needs to be or really beating his ass. The brother is absolute trash but did not have a redemption moment and is just let back into MC's life without anything. That does NOT sit well with me, it isn't right in any form and it's really the only negative point this story has. Besides being too damn short, but I can deal with that. XD Yeah, some points deduction for that part but otherwise this story is LOVELY. <3