I didn't like that the main conflict took that long to solve and things escalated due to that bastard ex of uke(?)...
But I love the seme(?) and his devotion towards uke!!! KYAAAA!
P.S.- When the author told the reasoning behind the story's name, I was kinda on the verge of tears. Yes, they are "ordinary" men who love each other... TT-TT
Ordinary Men