Uhhh age gap aside (it looked like an adult x middle schooler so I was like “ehhh” the whole time LOL the smut was nice tho), the plot forced in a lotta dramatic tropes and a shit ton of “oh my...you remembered that meaningful interaction from the past?!?!!” It didn’t flow very well and I was sorta bothered by the constant infant-teenager memories & parallels lmao. I couldn’t get into the story xd Good art at least.
On another note, some of the uke’s confessions were borderline yandere LOL it would’ve been more interesting if the story took that route
Charming Scarface