This ended way too sudden!!! Ugghhh!! This has so much potential!! The idea of the plot is there but it was really poorly delivered like so much plot holes but I understand since it's the author's first story but it's not bad!! It's good actually and very funny!! The last chapter with the bunnies had me laughing so hard!! The seme is also very funny because of how he keeps misinterpreting everything and he's so slow lol and the uke is a tsundere lol!! Overall, I really enjoyed reading it cuz it's funny, the characters were likeable, the art is good and the plot is okay but can be done better. I wish it was more laid out, like how they deal the problem with the antagonist, the side characters, and the development then, the story would be a lot better! Although the ending is really funny, I still wish there were more chapters cuz that's way too short!! I want more!!
Delivery Boy Debacle