This is not that bad but can be done a lot better. Tbh, I was really disappointed on this one cuz I really like the idea of the plot and this has so much potential!!! If the story have more chapters and more laid out, this one could be a lot way better story to read!! The characters were interesting and likeable especially the seme, he's so adorable!! but their characters were all sooo underdeveloped and there's not much of a character development which is really dissapointing. The story ended so sudden too!!! as well as their development like Idk what to feel, their feelings towards each other didn't seem so believable cuz it felt so sudden. The art is really good tho and the smut is hot but I wish there were more chapters because I really do believe the potential of this story!!! Nonetheless, I still enjoyed reading it. I also lowkey wish to see the naked buff body of the beefy seme!! He would probably be so hot and sexy but they didn't show it!!! Ugh!! So sad. :<
PS. I don't know why but somehow, this is giving me killing stalking vibes during the table sex lol probably because of the uke's expression and the eye bags lol
69 Street, Tomorrow Island