This is really good! Very well-written with interesting plot too! The drama and the plot twist is really well done! Although I already had a hunch that Seno was just faking it and I was right!! The ending is good too but the only problem I had aside that it's too short, I think the realization part where Natsuki realizes that he likes Seno is done too sudden like I need more development from him cuz it felt so rushed in that aspect. I want to see more character development from him cuz I kinda felt bad towards Seno when he treated him so harshly! But nonetheless, the story is still good and I wanted more!! I want to see what will happen to Hakishima! Overall, I really enjoyed reading it. I cried, got mad, and got chills, such a rollercoaster ride of emotions! The art and smut is good too! Highly recommended!
Kakkou no Yume