The Daughter of My First Love
Terrible story. Don't bother reading. SPOILER ALERT!!! I saw the comments about how bad it was and since nothing like Paedophilia, incest etc was mentioned, i thought let me see what they're talking about. Firstly, the story development is horrible, the characters are equally awful and the ending is, you guessed it, terrible. The main character lets call him 'Mister', is introduced as his wife tells him she's taking their daughter abroad to study. When he rightfully argues about being left alone, she rebuffs his concerns by saying he is a grown man who doesnt need looking after. Ive never understood this concept that ive seen or heard a lot about in korean culture, where a man/husband's wife and kids are living abroad to get better education or whatever, while the husband stays behind and works long hours to pay for said school fees and living expenses, for both himself and the rest of the family abroad. Usually living on combi meals and in shitty housing. Anyway, back to the story. They go off and he is left by himself. He runs into a young girl (20) at a food place, who reminds him of his first love, who is revealed to have been sort of a bitch(only dating him for revenge) and also sleeping with professors/other people etc to get good grades and opportunities, then lying and saying theg r*ped her. Its revealed the girl lives in his buliding, they have a few inappropriate encounters and its revealed that her mum is in fact the first love. The mum IMMEDIATELY gets way too familiar with Mister, when suddenly, Mister gets a call telling him that his wife and daughter have died in an accident overseas( HOW CONVENIENT). Mister is rightfully depressed for a few weeks and on the pretence of feeding him, the Mum inappropriately initiates sex with him and even goes on to suggest they get back together "like old times". She falls asleep peacefully, on his depressed lap and her daughter comes knocking, looking for her. Mister lies that the mum isnt there and accepts the daughters invitation to go upstairs so she can look after him and feed him. He eats and she falls asleep on the couch next to him and he starts to have thoughts of instances where he didnt do what he wanted and regretted it. So he looks at her, touches her p*ssy, removing her underwear and after an actual moment of clarity, says fuck it and literally plunges into her. She screams, he pulls out and runs when she questions his bullshit. The mum tries once more to fuck him when he gets downstairs but is rejected and goes upstairs to tell her daughter that shes thinking of marrying "her friend downstairs ". Daughter says no and eventually gets the uncle to promise not to marry the mum, as a way of apology for forcibly taking her virginity. Anyway a few things happen, and they do infact move in together during which, the mum travels abroad on several occasions and things get sexual between the daughter and Mister, though no penetration takes place. Then one day, even though he is still having sex with the mum while also having relations with the daughter, they finally decide to have penetrative sex. One day Mister and the daughter decide to go have lunch and she tells him to shave his stubble, which ends up makes him look just like her dad and she cancels their lunch to runs out to meet her dad. Her dad, as she mentioned during her first encounter with Mister, looks exactly like mister, only difference is his sideburns. Her dad is a struggling artist and through so bullshit thinking, she offers to pose NUDE for him. He, clearly having some sense, says fuck no thats inappropriate. But somehow this still happens with Mister's influence and her wearing a barely there mask. It gets worse, during this "incognito" session with her dad, she literally poses in explicit ways. Vagina wide open and exposed, EVERYTHING. And the dad, still (idiotically) having "no idea" that its his daughter, tells his "model" that all that extra exposure is not needed and asks her repeatedly to just pose normally. This, crazy enough, pisses off the daughter and she leaves. He later finds out it was her and proceeds to draw her nude again once the first painting sells for millions. Their relation is revealed to the public after the second paintings sells for even more but by then he is too rich to care and spends his money on a new house, host bars (where he r*pes one of the girls attending to him). Moving on, the mum finds out and berates both mister and the daughter, who gets angry at the mum too, because "its just art". Anyway, mister still sleeping with the daughter and mum, starts to having memory problems, having episodes he acts out of character and calls the daughter by the mum's name, "Sunny". So he goes to the doctor and finds out he has early onset Alzheimer's. Life goes on, things gets worse. The mum continues to leave the house to party, the daughter has a classmate who fancies her and who she takes to a hotel to sleep with after Mister goes missing. Mister is travelling cross country painting (oh yeah he was an art student in University and thats how he met the mum, but got kicked out after he assaulted a professor, who the mum told him had r*ped her, when in fact she willing went to his house of her own accord and sucked his dick/fucked him for favours), he was a promising student and can actually paint really well. Oh and the daughter modelled nude for her dad, after asking mister to paint her first. Back to his cross country travels, during which he has memory loss moments, he fucks a call girl during this. The daughter finds him after seeing a new report about a travelling artist and goes to meet him. At this point his memory is terrible and he cant even remember his bank pin. She pays for his meal and they have sex in his caravan, even though he doesn't remember her. She goes back home and he sleeps with some lady he meets at the beach who asks him to draw her, she stays with him for awhile but is never seen or mentioned again. He starts waiting for the girl (daughter) to return and after a while she does, but this time he only remembers her as "Sunny"(the mum) and asks her never to leave and to marry him. They figure out his bank pin, they buy a house and live for a while, as his memories get worse. He calls her a bitch and acts standoff-ish, as it seems he remembers "Sunny's" lies, asking her why shes there. She decides to go back to Seoul for a visit and while shes gone he goes to Busan and reminisces about his childhood and teenage years there. When he gets back, shes there and he says he wants to spend the rest of his short remaining days in busan, as he knows he doesnt have long left. They move there and he asks her for a baby as he wants to leave a piece of him behind. 14 years later(surprising cos im pretty sure he made it seem like he had a few weeks to 6 months to live), he is now living in America with his white wife along with his and "Sunny's" 13 year old daughter. He has sex with his wife, and dies not long after the sex. They mourn and the white wife, reveals to the child that the dad wanted his ashes scatter in his birth country, Korean, in the river at his hometown and that her mum, "Sunny" is alive. Back in Busan, "Sunny", is married to her classmate that fancied her, still living in the house she shared with Mister in busan. Theres a knock at the door, its the white wife who announces shes has to give her something Mister wanted her to have, the ashes. They sit and the white wife reveals that the child shes with is the "Sunny's" child with Mister and the child says "Hi Mom"... they go on a boat and scatter his ashes, all three say their goodbyes. At the airport, the child reveals that she wants to stay with her biological mum and does. Next scene, which is thankfully the last, "Sunny" and child are standing on the balcony and the child asks "Sunny" if she loved Mister. The story ends with a faint image of Mister in the sky and "Sunny" answers, "Did i love him?".
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