well shit's manga / #sighs(7)

2 stars One for hyesun and One for hanjun the true ogs of this story i love them they made this bearable eventhough they appeared like? 3 times in this story. Eunho this is a Plea for u to MOVE AWN but alas he still ended up with jaeha You know what jaeha actually needs? Not dick. Not a lover. HE NEEDS A THERAPIST! HE NEEDS HEWLP!!! Idc idc bc listen his emotions? Perfectly valid but the way he REACTS to those emotions to those AROUND HIM is NOT okay that is destructive and youre hurting everyone. And then youre justifying it? No bro lol People have feelings too???PLEASE open up to someone about it so that you have a person you can lean on?? Rather than having that shit accumulated and hurting not only your ex wife but eunho as well??? Its hard to open up i get it but hyesun had a point jaeha needs to Fight for his relationships if he wants them to work out. He did the bare minimum PLUS with no communication and then cries when he felt like life is shit to him?? And realizing that Oh eunho might not come back to me now that broke it off with him Bad LIKE no fucking shit honey lmao??? Its the way he didnt realize how much hes been so used to eunho’s love and adoration for him that he felt like he could do whatever he wants with it and i was hoping for the author to touch more about that but they didnt .. This shit could have ended so quickly if they attended couple’s therapy AND assigned a therapist for jaeha like fr im so sorry to hanjun and hyesun that they had to go through all that god eunho is a Soldier for being able to put up with that bc i know i couldnt

I see the author’s vision but the execution was way too janky and the characters too flat. the slap stick comedy and extremeness of everything was funny though, felt like author was doing a parody LMAO. just take it with a grain of salt and imagine youre watching a hilarious speedrun of a highschool play head empty!!! Wee!!! Usually i love these kind of light and silly stories but i was nawt feeling the characters lol author was having a fun time doing this they said fuck the plot we’re doing camp!!! And good for them!

Pacing was so damn quick author had a race with it LMAO title is so real though like girl me too

Ml is a big avid fan of mc and its just a cute lighthearted head empty read!

YEAHHHH the whole secret agents premise was so so good and fun, REFRESHING EVEN but idk WHY i was so convinced in the beginning that juergen was part of the knights templar. like i was hyped up for a “theyre lovers but theyre secret spies of different opposing factions OH NAUR forbidden, star crossed lovers!!!” BUT NO!! They were from the same faction??? And it just boggled me bc then what is the conflict really… like youre in the same faction, fighting for the same cause, joachim’s conflict was so illogically written i found myself rereading his monologues so many times bc his conflic could have been solved easily if he just talked it out with yuergen? Theyre spies? Why are they acting so unprofessionally? I was getting frustrated with joachim’s resolve on “not wanting to burden” yuergen and ALWAYS not being strict with that resolve, he always falls right back to yuergen whenever they have sex and its sooooooo redundant? Yuergen was such a flat character too, i was expecting to a see his pov when joachim fell into the dragon lair but we only got a dialogue retelling???????????? Bro…. Thats your chance to show a side of yuergen being desperate for joachim AND his acceptance into being a dragon, and u left that out OFF SCENE??? AUTHOR WHY?????? Atp i was so turned off from the story bc no amount of sex can save the flat characters and plot. It was so ???????? Huh?????? Even in the epilogue i couldnt find a reason to like juergen that much bc what was even his reason to like joachim and vice versa??? Sexual compatibility sure but they didnt share any personal information to bond over???? Like at LEAST something cliche like “oh he understood my feelings of isolation and loneliness like no other” was enough but not even that lmao AND HELLO WE DIDNT EVEN GET A FUNNY LIL SIDE STORY ON WHY JUERGEN EVEN GOT HIS DICK BEADED. LIKE WHAT WAS THE REASON?? WAS IT A DARE?? A DRUNK DECISION?? IM MORE CURIOUS ON THAT THAN THE DAMN PLOT NOW WORLDBUILDING. Pray tell what the fuck was the templar’s existence even for. I hate when stories like this promise such a big and promising plot point only for it to fall on its ass flat as hell. WHY. Like sure templars bad they side with gangsters and crime syndicates but WHY???????? They seem old fashioned and rely on magic. Where did the magic came from??? How and why were they formed???? So the SIA is in the woodworks with the lord of the city but what about the templars’ motives???? What is going AWNNNN. I always pride mysef in understanding even the most complicated plot but this is just. The plot holes are INSANE???? AND WHAT BECOMES OF JUERGEN NOW HES THE LORD OF NYC (which is such a corny ass title btw) like sure the higher ups know but how was it revealed??? Why and how was he in the SIA?? What hppens to Shadow?? Does he get promoted??? HUH And youre telling me, all of this chaos was bc yvonne wanted to dip her og dragon body???? if SIA doesnt solve crimes shes gonna get angry???? For what???? She doesnt even seem that emotionally attached to the city, and shes the most powerful being what would a few mishaps even do to her?? All this just bc she wants to orchestrate a scenario where juergen gets awakened??? NO WIND THAT BACK explain in more detail about joachim’s body is compatible with juergen like whats the lore here. How would yvonne know they would hit it off physically?????? She knows of the third method of dragon awakening but still why joachim?? And all of this just bc she wants a damn vacation??? HUH?????? IT DOESNT MAKE ANY CENTS….. AND NOW UR TELLING ME SIA AND TEMPLARS ARE BUDDY BUDDY BC JUERGEN IS LORD OF THE CITY??? Whats with the ominous plot tension between the two factions in the first place . AND ONE THING THAT PISSED ME OFF THE MOST: stop STOP giving joachim the most insane, silly ass plot armor. I know yvonne and robert were in on it and wanted joachim to be the link to awaken yuergen . But yall could have just killed him at the dragon lair and force the awakening. LIKE BE EVIL. WHATS THIS LUKE WARMED “i’ll let you choose” BULLSHIT. WHAT??????? 3 times !! 3 TIMES joachim got the “i’ll let u choose/off” plot armor. Im PISSEDDDDD. I think the reason im this heated is bc i let this story sit for a year yall. NAY 2 years and expected a solid, decent plot. But there were so many plot holes. AND IM ANGRY bc this is my favourite dynamic. Ml borderline yandere behaviour. OBSESSED AND POSSESIVE. IN AN AGENT UNDERCOVER TROPE. We could have had a masterpiece. How could u fumble it this bad. And when the artist said they were worried they wouldnt be able to portray juergen and joachim’s relationship properly. SADLY YEAH. It wasnt even well written type of flawed character. Its the poorly executed one where they have 0 charisma and likability. GAHHH im pissed at how long i left this aside. So SOO much potential. World building was promising, the trope was there and the insane, emotionally codependent couple dynamic was perfect even…. Sigh. SIGHHHBBHHBBBHHH.

no stars because its straight up ASS just some dookie ass cow shit story and characters. pacing was ass, character depth was non existent, plot and development was ASS. Ml aggravated me the fucking most like how the fuck did u get into medical school when your critical thinking skills is non existent??? Dont get me wrong, i love the misunderstanding trope but this was done so so poorly and lazily ITS JUST ASS YO???? did no one proof read the draft of this story????? Its so so poorly written, its so insanely immature lol dont get me started with the “2nd ml” side plot my god the way i rolled my eyes there has to be a red RED line manual book of shit mls/mcs must NOT do no matter the plot bc it will be a major turn off for the audience and the ml here was able to hit every single one of those icks and atp, just dont make the main couple end game bc it just feels so shallow and lazy LMAO especially when its not even a dead dove kind of plot?? the misunderstanding could have been written so much better but no it was just lazy ass writing??? Like im baffled at how lazy the whole thing was presented?? Ml kept on getting plot armour it was infuriating. Mc should have kicked him in the balls, signed the inheritance pseudo marriage agreement, file a divorce and dipped WITH the inheritance money bc 7 years…over some idiotic misunderstanding from ML’s dookie ass assumption… mama u deserve better lmao sigh hate that i read this till the end with hopes that the author would improve and maybe leave it in a more ambiguous ending where ml continues to try and win mc over but no ofc not lol god i cant stop laughing please dont be like me dont waste your time reading this

It was okay, the progression was a bit awkward and characters were flat. NOT a fan of ml’s character that much lol