JessFS's manga / #Creepy Ass Pervs(6)

This story is so unreasonable, there's people dying by the hundreds, but the characters just wanna fuck and swim in their emocional mess (that is also unreasonable and inconsistent, their feelings and emotional crisis always feel fake and are just plot devices to "move" the story [wich doesn't really happen. They change places/time period, but the story doesn't really move much {or does.. in distubing, cruel and unreasonable way...]). I don't understand why the author fucked all the characters so bad, at this point - hapter 61- feels like either everyone is either gonna die (a horrible death) or have to live in awful angst til the rest of their lives (especially Noah, his origins and the things that happened to him are simply horrifying). There's issues with the writing/building of the story too, the emperor thing, for example: I spent a huge chunk of the story thinking that Noah was a prince of some sort, because this emperor wannabe thing just doesn't make sense. And the witches, the author established a rule about the parent's soul thing, and then made Leo an exception (??) right after, for no good reason, and now there's the weird ass demon/curse thing. It's just so fucking confusing and inconsistent!! This makes me so fucking mad!!!! I was starting to like some of the character and suddenly it just became a gorey shit show. I wish I could stand it a bit more, to see the end of everything, but I can't, it became too disturbing for me. I'm disapointed :(((

This obsession of the male lead with the main character is just... he's advancing towards a 6 and later a 11 y.o. and the author portrays that as if it's natural and ok and I don't even know how to express, like... I don't care if he's only 4 years older than her, it doesn't make it ok. Their relationship and also the "heroic" disposition of the ML feels kinda forced to me, I don't know, their dinamics just make me really unconfortable. Oh, and there's also that annoying cliché where the ML is just breathing, but just that is enough to make all females in 500m fall in love.