KatyJay's manga / #friendship(8)

Really loved the story with the older Udou brother. Takayuki x Kiyotake are my favorite pair. the other two are a cute second best. This story was extremely close to getting five stars, but towards the cute and adorable end of the story with Takayuki Udou and Kiyotake Seiji, Udou's younger brother and his boyfriend's story were shown. There is a separate story with the younger Udou brother and his boyfriend. This story with the Older Udou brother and Kiyotake was a spin-off of that story. So for me, the story with the younger Udou needs to stay in its own place and not take over what is supposed to bethe story of the older Udou brother. In the beginning there were small appearances and it was fine, but from middle to end, more of the younger Udou's story was showing to the point that half of two chapters of the story were the younger Udou's story. Also, if the story is about the older Udou brother, it should end with his story, not a guest star's story. (This'll be the end of my rant. Thank you.) I loved the last chapter. It was wonderful. I have complete love for it. Only wish it was longer and I could see them do it. Really want more of this story!!

Really cute. Loved this story.