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Dawg what   reply

Yikes, okay let me try to take your word salad on for a second here: Uh, hate to break it to you, but the women that dress ""modestly"" according to your standards are raped all the time, especially in countries where modest dress is the norm. Not to mention people in general are far more likely to be assualted by someone they know, ie aquaintence,......   reply

to find a balance between smut and story if youre actually trying to tell a story-- we do not need more 20 chapter smut followed by 1 chapter of actual plot, to the point where the story is hindered and ends up devolving. and yeah i get that sex sells well, but from a story-telling quality standpoint, you need to know when smut is not needed for th......   reply

Please please please please PLEASE hire and editor. Or at least have a second opinion to help you organize the pacing and character continuity.   reply

Kindly kys   reply

IF YOU'RE PLANNING TO WRITE A CHARA'S THAT GOES THROUGH SA. WRITE IT PROPERLY. Yes, you can be blunt about it but do it in a wsy thats not offensive. You're not writing a pornhua so grow a pair and do some research. INTERACT WITH FEMALES IN YOUR LIFE IF YOU'RE ADDING A FEMALE CHARA IN AN ACTION NOVEL. YALL CANT WRITE FOR SHIT. Also this is geared ......   reply

Immediate sex is never a way to start a chapter thanks i do NOT want the sfx "fwop fwop" to be the first thing i see   2 reply