yea im an author so um i need this im writing a book called Lovespell right now and I could really use some motivation help so if this is still going on please help i always get sidetracked and/or give up i've already dropped like 5 books i planned on publishing even when i was almost 100 pages in and it was actually good helpp reply
Do you want feedback on problems with things like verb tense and grammar? Eg.
“manages to lift his head just a bit. letting his upturned face catch the raindrops.”
Has no capital at sentence beginning, uses present tense v past tense (you started in past tense) and unusual punctuation mid sentence. So this would be better if it was like:
“H...... reply
