BL Review: BJ Alex
[Experience]
10 02,2021
Spooky stuff
[Answer]
09 02,2021
Spooky stuff
[Question]
09 02,2021
It wasn't a secret that Yingyue adores his child.
He was the last of them anyways.
The child Is Extremely attached to Yingyue as well.
They are rarely ever seen apart. If Ying Yue isn't carrying the small boy in his arms, the boy is usually nearby playing. It was understandable why he protected the boy so much. (plot-point-ish) There was even a rumor the child was his actual son, and autumn was the mother. Of course, that would never happen.
But over almost a Year Yingyue had noticed some peculiar things about the boy. The child was remarkably quiet and unbothered. The child often Bit his skin leaving long-lasting marks and cuts when stressed. And Because Yingyue Had realized long ago the kid couldn't hear well, it was odd the kid knew how to speak when never being taught how to. often saying
"Shishi"
Meaning "Father"
That wasn't Solarian It was Noonian. They were nowhere near Nooniua. So Who taught the boy to speak?
Acassionly The Boy Seems a bit off putting. He stares right above Yingyue's shoulder most of the time, so times He bites his skin, sometimes He gets so frightened he cries. It often worried Yingyue That The child was seeing something he couldn't. Yingyue Was even more concerned, How sometimes seems to be playing with someone even though there is no one there.
When he expressed His Worry Autumn And Jiru they both dismissed it as the child's imagination.
"Maybe he has a scary imaginary friend?" Autumn said
"Yeah, Why are you being like this?" Jiru Added.
Yingyue Doubts that they were wrong, But he doesn't rule out the option of it being himself. (He does have a reason for it)
This worry only seems to grow as he gets older.
Rain
Is What they liked to call the Child, Yingyue Never gave him an official name because he was bad at naming. When The Child was old enough, he would choose a name for himself. (Ryuu) The Child was Now eight and to no one's surprise, the family only grew bigger. the kid now had two older siblings and one younger. They were all completely different from him. They were quite loud and active. They all seemed to be extremely smart as well. Sometimes Rain's only friend Rae Comes over, She Will often fawn over gifts Yingyue never got for Rain. And Rain didn't tell him where they came from.
Whenever Rain writes It seems to be about someone else. an example would be one day when Rain brought a poem he made to Yingyue.
Rain Raises up the paper to Yingyue's face. Rain Had neat handwriting for his age. It was in cursive which was not how he normally wore.
Yingyue Read the poem.
Leah?
It was almost a perfect poem describing Leah. Leah had been dead for years, and when she was alive, Rain was much too young to remember what she looked like.
The poem portrayed an almost fairy-like girl With Coral rose hair, bright turquoise eyes, and her trademark mood-changing flower on her head.
Although It came off as more shock and disbelief this was almost confirmation that something was clearly wrong and he wasn't seeing It.
(Fuck it, I made this a horror story kinda and now I actually have a plot...sort of)
He was the last of them anyways.
The child Is Extremely attached to Yingyue as well.
They are rarely ever seen apart. If Ying Yue isn't carrying the small boy in his arms, the boy is usually nearby playing. It was understandable why he protected the boy so much. (plot-point-ish) There was even a rumor the child was his actual son, and autumn was the mother. Of course, that would never happen.
But over almost a Year Yingyue had noticed some peculiar things about the boy. The child was remarkably quiet and unbothered. The child often Bit his skin leaving long-lasting marks and cuts when stressed. And Because Yingyue Had realized long ago the kid couldn't hear well, it was odd the kid knew how to speak when never being taught how to. often saying
"Shishi"
Meaning "Father"
That wasn't Solarian It was Noonian. They were nowhere near Nooniua. So Who taught the boy to speak?
Acassionly The Boy Seems a bit off putting. He stares right above Yingyue's shoulder most of the time, so times He bites his skin, sometimes He gets so frightened he cries. It often worried Yingyue That The child was seeing something he couldn't. Yingyue Was even more concerned, How sometimes seems to be playing with someone even though there is no one there.
When he expressed His Worry Autumn And Jiru they both dismissed it as the child's imagination.
"Maybe he has a scary imaginary friend?" Autumn said
"Yeah, Why are you being like this?" Jiru Added.
Yingyue Doubts that they were wrong, But he doesn't rule out the option of it being himself. (He does have a reason for it)
This worry only seems to grow as he gets older.
Rain
Is What they liked to call the Child, Yingyue Never gave him an official name because he was bad at naming. When The Child was old enough, he would choose a name for himself. (Ryuu) The Child was Now eight and to no one's surprise, the family only grew bigger. the kid now had two older siblings and one younger. They were all completely different from him. They were quite loud and active. They all seemed to be extremely smart as well. Sometimes Rain's only friend Rae Comes over, She Will often fawn over gifts Yingyue never got for Rain. And Rain didn't tell him where they came from.
Whenever Rain writes It seems to be about someone else. an example would be one day when Rain brought a poem he made to Yingyue.
Rain Raises up the paper to Yingyue's face. Rain Had neat handwriting for his age. It was in cursive which was not how he normally wore.
Yingyue Read the poem.
Leah?
It was almost a perfect poem describing Leah. Leah had been dead for years, and when she was alive, Rain was much too young to remember what she looked like.
The poem portrayed an almost fairy-like girl With Coral rose hair, bright turquoise eyes, and her trademark mood-changing flower on her head.
Although It came off as more shock and disbelief this was almost confirmation that something was clearly wrong and he wasn't seeing It.
(Fuck it, I made this a horror story kinda and now I actually have a plot...sort of)
writing in isekai genre creatively
[Answer]
07 02,2021
writing in isekai genre creatively
[Question]
07 02,2021
You know, isekai genre is such a commodity nowadays, it's difficult to even distinguish it properly. I love it, but I still have to admit that it has been growing stale, with all of the "villainess" and "mediocre protag with a cheat" and "dude with a harem of fantasy girls" scenarious. I noticed that it had become more of a crutch for stories - just some plot convinience to set up the story, which then is run on "easy mode", so that author can focus on romance and cool action and whatnot.
So, my question: if you were to write an "isekai reincarnation" plot, how would you subvert the normal formula to make it interesting?
Example: I've been thinking about starting a story set in a roguelike-inspired game world - not RPG or otome - where the MC, who is placed in a body of the weakest, most challenging character, keeps dying and returning to the beginning, with everything lost and the dungeon completely randomized. That way, the stupid trope of "ooooh, i know EVERYTHING about the plot and dungeons and secret quests" is demolished, and the MC has to use their knowledge about the game creatively.
So, my question: if you were to write an "isekai reincarnation" plot, how would you subvert the normal formula to make it interesting?
Example: I've been thinking about starting a story set in a roguelike-inspired game world - not RPG or otome - where the MC, who is placed in a body of the weakest, most challenging character, keeps dying and returning to the beginning, with everything lost and the dungeon completely randomized. That way, the stupid trope of "ooooh, i know EVERYTHING about the plot and dungeons and secret quests" is demolished, and the MC has to use their knowledge about the game creatively.
I Need to stop making these
[Answer]
07 02,2021
Writing Group
[Answer]
07 02,2021
Writing Group
[Answer]
07 02,2021
Writing Group
[Answer]
07 02,2021
I Need to stop making these
[Question]
05 02,2021
Um... anyways
Seth Jerred "You're quite emotional today, my dear." He said those words inches away from his lips. Seth Began to Kiss Ryuu, pushing His Tougne In.
Seth looks at How Peaceful he couldn't help Kisses him again.
And again
And again
Ryuu Pounds his fist against the man.
Again
And Again
No One sees Them, So Ryuu Glaces At Seth His Azure eyes meet Seth's Ruby Red eyes. There Was The Usual Lust Set In the tall man's eyes. Seth being Aggressive with him; Ryuu didn't know the source of his bad mood. He thought to Himself It may be better If he let the man have his way with him.
The Man Fully Sumbittied Himself to the kiss and let Seth do Whatsoever he wanted. He wrapped his head around his neck.
"S-eth." Ryuu mummer against his lips, His speech was desperate
"..." Seth Pulled away for a moment. It had been A while since they last did it. Ryuu's voice took Seth by surprise. Seth's Desire to ruin the shorter man had overcome him.
Seth grabbed Ryuu's arm, and they walked off into an abandoned room no one used. They Locked the door behind them. The Two continued on their make-out session, leaned up against a desk Seth encircled his arms around Ryuu's waist and gripped them tightly. Ryuu gave out a soft moan, Gripping His Brown hair in pleasure. Seth gave him quick kisses on his neck. The other man nearly began to whimper but held himself back.
Seth Smirked and Seemed to say. "You Taste so good, baby." Seth Pulled away. The Man Bit His Neck and kissed it passionately. Leaving Marks on it. Ryuu Held onto him even tighter "How does it Feel holding onto me like this and as I spoil your neck."
He hoarsely whispered into his ear. "Don't be shy now. Let me hear your voice." he went back to kissing Ryuu, and he couldn't contain it and gave out a loud moan. He quickly becomes conscious of the moan and covered his mouth.
Girl I made the whole thing, but cut is short because it's long.
And In the wise words of someone I know. "You see that? No of course you didn't because you didn't do shit, now go do something productive!"
Seth Jerred "You're quite emotional today, my dear." He said those words inches away from his lips. Seth Began to Kiss Ryuu, pushing His Tougne In.
Seth looks at How Peaceful he couldn't help Kisses him again.
And again
And again
Ryuu Pounds his fist against the man.
Again
And Again
No One sees Them, So Ryuu Glaces At Seth His Azure eyes meet Seth's Ruby Red eyes. There Was The Usual Lust Set In the tall man's eyes. Seth being Aggressive with him; Ryuu didn't know the source of his bad mood. He thought to Himself It may be better If he let the man have his way with him.
The Man Fully Sumbittied Himself to the kiss and let Seth do Whatsoever he wanted. He wrapped his head around his neck.
"S-eth." Ryuu mummer against his lips, His speech was desperate
"..." Seth Pulled away for a moment. It had been A while since they last did it. Ryuu's voice took Seth by surprise. Seth's Desire to ruin the shorter man had overcome him.
Seth grabbed Ryuu's arm, and they walked off into an abandoned room no one used. They Locked the door behind them. The Two continued on their make-out session, leaned up against a desk Seth encircled his arms around Ryuu's waist and gripped them tightly. Ryuu gave out a soft moan, Gripping His Brown hair in pleasure. Seth gave him quick kisses on his neck. The other man nearly began to whimper but held himself back.
Seth Smirked and Seemed to say. "You Taste so good, baby." Seth Pulled away. The Man Bit His Neck and kissed it passionately. Leaving Marks on it. Ryuu Held onto him even tighter "How does it Feel holding onto me like this and as I spoil your neck."
He hoarsely whispered into his ear. "Don't be shy now. Let me hear your voice." he went back to kissing Ryuu, and he couldn't contain it and gave out a loud moan. He quickly becomes conscious of the moan and covered his mouth.
Girl I made the whole thing, but cut is short because it's long.
And In the wise words of someone I know. "You see that? No of course you didn't because you didn't do shit, now go do something productive!"
