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so much wrong with this one page!
Correction: "If you WON'T wake up," or "If you'RE not AWAKE," or "If you'RE not WOKE up..."
Correction: "HAVE you WOKEN up?" or "Are you Awake YET?" "Are you wakING up?"
Correction: "Even though I haven't finishED THE most important PART OF THE TALK yet..."
Correction: "Just holding handS like this..."
Corrections: "Since we first STARTED dating," AND "IT hurtS you know" AND "I... I'm Sor- rY-?"
Correction: "I feel really OBLIGED/Indebted to you/sorry/Guilty about that..."
Correction: "I'm afraid THAT you'RE gonna get tired of me..."
Correction: "YOU'RE makING the seat MOVE/WOBBLE/WIGGLE"
Correction: "People will FIND us" AND "My underwear IS/underwear's gonna get all wet"
Correction: "That SmilING face"
Correction: "Go see A movie," and "lie down holding each other'S handS"
Correction #2: "If you come this much areN'T you losING your head over it/Are you losING your MIND?"
Correction: "What are you doing when PEOPLE ARE sleeping"
Correction: "I'll cum right away if I put it in HIS mouth."
Correction: "It's already sticky in his pantS!"
Correction #2: "I don't want to only BE having sex," OR "I don't want to JUST BE having sex."
