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Correction: "Aren't you used to COMING to the beach"
"There's no necessity" should be "There's no reason" or "It's not necessary"
NOT "What happens" it's "What HAPPENED"
"If I think in something nice" should be "If I THINK ABOUT something nice."
"What did just" should be "what just" or "what did..." and "hurt" should be plural "hurts"
"Besides having a complex" (There is no reason for the "of" in that sentence.)
Correction: "Not even at home HAVE I FELT an atmosphere like this one."
"I'll better forget" should be "I'D better forget"
"Tokio" is "Tokyo"
"How about YOUR..." should be "How about YOU"
"You've overestimating me" SHOULD BE "You're overestimating me" or "You've overestimated me"
"GUTS" not "BUTS"
Not "Women" it's "WOMAN"! DUR!
Corrections: "If you mean YOU'VE forgotten..." and "...into the train, I'LL have forgotten..."
Correction: "You're already wet HERE"
YET AGAIN! "Sprout" should be "SPOUT!"!!!!
Correction: "That WAS A little strange..."
Corrections: "We fooled around and THEY were nice..."
"While I WAS LAUGHING WITH them..."
"While I WAS LAUGHING WITH them..."
