Comments of A Paramour

When did I drop this

The End is rushed

Honestly it’s a really great story love the characters so much and I’m glad they have true happiness

4.9.24:

It’s definitely extremely cute and sexy and I love the slow development between the main character and the main top. It’s shounen ai but the way the top touches our bottom is so sensual. It definitely makes you blush

The relationship between our main characters is definitely not normal, however. Our main top is much much much older than our bottom and our top literally acted like a guardian figure when our bottom was just a toddler, so it kind of feels incestual but it’s not. Our bottom, even though is an adult also acts like a 12 year old. It’s very cute but also kind of wrong in this relationship dynamic.

Overall, I think the story is cute and there definitely is a main villain of the story, which is the main pops mother, who tries to destroy their relationship however, I just think that there are way too many chapters and not enough plot to keep me going.

I skipped to the last chapter, and what the actual fuck. The main character just dropped everything because he couldn’t do it anymore and pursued his passion of painting on the island were they first met each other. They lived together and essentially eloped. There were no side stories, nothing, that was just it.

I don't really know what to even say. Maybe I'd continue reading it if the translation was better, but honestly this plot is already a no for me. Another miss from this creator.

1000000000000000000/10.
JUST RE-READ IT, AND BWAT AND THIS STORY NEVER FAIL TO MAKE ME TEARY EYES. THE ENDING WAS CHEF KISS

Tbh this was very mid and the plot was boring. Art style is not my preference.

Rushed ending

I dunno why this is highly rated lol you don’t have to like everything an author make. Started just scrolling just to finish. So many things left unanswered. Even the girl who got beat up by her ex showed up but some stories are missing. What a waste

It's seems a bit rushed at the end. Also it feels like there Is missing something maybe because a few plot holes

Honestly…. The ending was so lack luster …. They had an amazing buildup and so many unanswered questions like his fear of elevators. The outcome of his mother. I’ve never been so disappointed with an ending. It’s anticlimactic. It’s rushed. I expected a happy ending but not this forced

I DID NOT READ THIS FULLY BECAUSE I GOT DISTRACTED BTLY OTHER STORIESbut If my future self is reading this comment I hooe you will spare some time to read this story from the start 'til the end :>

Very good but a tat disappointed by some of the choices made by the author :
- lots of “I’ll think about it later” or “oh I forgot that” very frustrating when it’s too much and it is
- not enough of side couple
- ending felt like the last possible. Like as if there was a list of different endings of this story and this one was the bottom one, chosen in last. As if it was a backup ending. As if to say “And if we don’t know what to decide let’s just say they run away and that’s it.” It would be a satisfying ending if it wasn’t brought so abruptly. I’m happy they’re happy but as there wasn’t any trace of them still being in contact with other characters it felt as if the author didn’t care for it and it makes me sad

NOOO THIS ISN’T ENOUGH

Nice storyline, wish there are side stories for all the main characters.