beta
This story is good as it is, the unnecessary drama with the kidnapping and shit makes it more ridiculous than hard hitting. We know the father is an absolute piece of diarrhea vomit ass, I think conflict with him could've been built differently (and it already happened as the MC confronted him in the best way possible lol) Also, what's the point of that blondie existing? Even in the story, he doesn't advance anything plot wise (I don't like it when characters are used for that alone, but at least, he'd have some purpose; MC and ML grow closer regardless of the shit blondie does; the SA and suicide attempt could've happened without blondie existing and being there), he's not an interesting stand alone character and doesn't have his own story (which I wouldn't be interested in anyways). I feel like the author just made him as a contrast to the ML and to sprinkle in some additional tension and outside pressure on the main couple as well as some background for the ML (again, he has a strong enough background without blondie), but the MC is already that contrasting character.
Y'all, I need a slow burn BL full of desire and intensity. I hate when they get at it from chapter 1 or even in the first 10 chapters.
Something with tension and intensity building up over time and as the relationship progresses, I don't want them to just decide they wanna fuck and then go together like that.
Can be toxic (no rape/non con tho), can be a enemies to lovers or even enemies to enemies who fuck trope, or no trope at all, as long as there is desire, infatuation , eroticism and a good plot. Thanks in advance! (づ￣ ³￣)づ
full moon alchemist
some of my favorites:
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/no_moral/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/a_proxy_painter/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/green_apple_paradise/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/incidentally_dyed_by_spring_s_love/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_pizza_delivery_man_and_the_gold_palace/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/king_s_maker_triple_crown/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/eternal_covenant/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_man_who_can_t_taste/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/beyond_memories/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/antidote_harusari/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/no_moral/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/a_proxy_painter/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/green_apple_paradise/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/king_s_maker_triple_crown/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_man_who_can_t_taste/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/eternal_covenant/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_pizza_delivery_man_and_the_gold_palace/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/antidote_harusari/
• https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/beyond_memories/
Thanks, will check it out
Thank you so much for the long list, you even sent two long ones! I'm diving right into it all, so excited!! You're a godsent <3 <3
No worries, hope there's at least one title that suits your liking! :D (I thought the first reply wasn't posted so I replied twice, my bad!)
Oh and I forgot to mention that if you are planning to read King's Maker, please read this version first (Chapter 1-37, PG15, Season 1): https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/king_s_maker/
And then you can continue with this one (Season 2, Mature version): https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/king_s_maker_triple_crown/
Also please heed the warning in season 1, there's a brief ped*philia
I have BL burnout. Recommend me something so good I get out of it lovelies
Assuming you don't want any bl rn! Maybe try reading An Animal Hospital in the Border Area.
this happens to me a lot especially after i force myself to get thru mid yaoi but “checkmate” (by tan) got me out of a particularly bad one
and if you don’t wanna read yaoi i recommend “trash of the counts family”
I'm open to anything, and also good BL. Thanks for the recs
Yeah, mid stuff and also a long list of things I want to read but kinda can't get into. Will check it out, thanks
i’ve seen that max mojave’s case was in your want to read list and please read it it’s one of my all time fav stories it’s written really well also i just got done reading this story and is definitely on my top stories also it’s also very satisfying how well the art progresses throughout the story i’ve taken 10+ ss of the art alone https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/radio_storm/
Just noticed this comment now for some reason lol, thanks , will do, can't pick UNTIL THIS DAY what I want to read
honestly choose the shortest story out of all our suggestions and go from there!
I reread this cause I was bored (gave it 3 stars back then, now it's 2 tbh), and the main couple is ass tbh. (The only good thing that came out of this story for me is the manager × singer couple, and even that is mid, but like 3/5 mid) The ML is just as pushy and a yellow flag as any other average alpha, and uses the whole fated pair thing to push the MC's boundaries. He did restrain himself in a crucial moment (bare minimum), but from then on, behaved like a typical pushy, at times kinda bland alpha. Too rough and mean during sex, wouldn't stop when the MC felt uncomfortable, would just in the middle of sex say stuff like 'I'll breed you now' (I know it's a kink and all, but some enthusiastic consent and breeding wish from both would've been hotter and better) regardless of wether or not the MC was ready for that (family planning where??), so if you were to remove the fated pair dynamic, just looking at those moments alone, shows he's kinda shitty and the relationship seems almost concerning in those moments. The ML supposedly wanted to empower the MC, just to push him more and more into a submissive role imo. I know in the omegaverse, it's an alpha's nature to be protective and possessive often, but the way the ML is written leads me to believe he was supposed to be not like the others, to be the healing experience for the MC, but he didn't come off as that. There was little gentleness, patience or that type of loving, nurturing protectiveness. He was just a regular ass alpha, but wasn't a rapist... So the bar is in hell.