Hmmmmmmm... While all this 'revenging' is veri nice and kewl there is something missing in my eyes- MOTIVE. Now listen, I'm stupid so I might've missed it but there's a clear lack of any strong motive for the PM to choose the "I'm gonna fuck everyone over" route. NOW LISTEN, I do think this story is VERY gud, the MC is veri smort and everything I just feel like something is missing- maybe it has to do with character set up or some small backstory for a solid motive... But like I said I'm stoopid, especially my 2AM brain lol